The Upset [Podcast version]

Set in the near future, The Upset tells the story of Harry, a former priest, who returns to his visit abandoned church. To read the original story click here. [Excellent music clips used with the kind permission of Sanzkrit - www.facebook.com/Sanzkrit]

Cowboys and Indians

By Andy Hamilton

The crosshairs track from the windscreen of one car to the next. Silence. She sits in the centre of a large double bed, folding strips of paper into smaller and smaller shapes. He is crouched behind the open window, watching everything that moves.
“Daddy? Daddy!”

“Yes sweetie?”

“Look,” she says as she lifts a triangular piece of red paper high into the air. “I’ve made a party dress. Just like one of Mommy’s.”

“Okay,” he says, his eyes still fixed on the window. “That’s nice.”

From the second story window he can see everything that approaches the house from the road. He can see a truck or large van from a mile away or more. He can see the gate, and behind it apple saplings, long ago strangled by hungry weeds. He can see the tiny stone well, were they had once tied twine to willow branches and pretended to fish. He can see the two black cars that sit in the driveway.

“Daddy?”

“Yes?”

“Are we like cowboys?”

“Cowboys? What do you mean cowboys?”

“Like on the telly. Are we like those cowboys?”

“Do you mean, are we the good guys?”

"Ya… I suppose that’s sort-of what I mean.”

“Okay. Then yes, I think we’re cowboys.” He forces a smile. “Tha’ okay wit’ you part-ner?”

She nods and returns to folding paper.

           

“Daddy?”

“Yes sweetie.”

“Do you think that Mommy can see us?”

“What?”

“Mommy. I think she can. I think she’s watching us right now.”

A mobile phone begins to ring underneath the giant white pillow at the head of the bed.

“Don’t worry,” she says. “I’ll get it.”

“No!” he shouts and grabs for the phone. “No. It’s not for you. Okay, not for you.”

She presses her head into the great white pillow. Scraps of paper have settled on the bed, the floor, the windowsill. His ears are filled with silence.

“Sweetie,” he says. “Sweetie, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to snap. I just need to concentrate. Sweetie?”

She sits up and wipes her cheeks with the sleeves of her jumper.

“Maybe they’re asleep?” she says, at last.

“You think?”

“Ya, I always get sleepy in the car. Maybe they’re just having a little nap?”

“I dunno sweetie, it’s a funny place to fall asleep.”

“Not really actually, Mommy was always falling asleep in the car. Wasn’t she?”

The mobile phone, now on the floor beside his knees, starts to ring.

“For Gods sake!” he shouts and throws the phone out the open window. The tiny missile strikes the bonnet of the car closest to the house, and shatters into four pieces. “Shite,” he says, peering after it. “Shite”

A car door opens and a large man walks slowly to where the fragments of plastic and metal have collected. He kneels to examine them, tossing pieces carelessly here and there.

“Who is that?” she whispers.

“That’s the sheriff.”

“The sheriff! But we’re the cowboys, shouldn’t the sheriff be on our side?”

“You would think so, wouldn’t you,” he mutters.

“What?”

“No sweetie, he’s not that sort of sheriff. He’s a bailiff.”

“I don’t get it?”

“That’s ‘cause it’s complicated. He is a sheriff, but he’s a different kind of sheriff from the ones in the Wild West.”

“Is he like a bad sheriff then?”

“I don’t know sweetie, maybe?”

“Hum, I still don’t get it.”

“I know,” he says. “I don’t really get it either.”

           

Four men are standing in the front garden. A tall man in a black suit looks up towards the bedroom window and shrugs.

“What’s it going to be?” he says.

She is crawling on the bed, stuffing small pieces of paper into her pockets.

“Why don’t you lie down behind the bed?” he asks. “Like when we play hide and seek?” His finger hovers over the trigger. “Pull the duvet down over your head. Go on now.”

They hear a knock on the front door.

“Daddy, I’m scared Daddy. I don’t want the bad sheriff to come into our house.”

“Don’t worry sweetie. I don’t want that either. Now you just get under the duvet. This well all be over soon. Go on now.”

“Daddy?” she says from underneath the duvet. “Do you think Mommy can see us?”
“I don’t know sweetie. I just don’t know.”

The Controls

By Andy Hamilton

“We should have left a note,” she says, watching him struggle with the oversized steering wheel.
“Will you stop with the note already!”

“It’s just, I’m just saying…”

“I know, but you’ve been ‘just saying’ every five minutes since we left.”

She folds her arms tightly and peers through the windscreen.

"Listen,” he says. “We’ve practiced for this, haven’t we?”

“Yes but…” 
“We’re ready. You said it yourself. We can’t learn anymore from practicing, we need to start doing. You said that yourself.”

“I know, but this is different; this is dangerous. If we’d just left a note, then if something goes wrong, someone might…”

“What could go wrong?” he interrupts. “We both know what we’re doing. Right?”

“Yes but…”

“Okay then. Lets go.”

           

“Look!” he says, pointing at a grey spec through the windscreen. “There it is.”

“There? Really, are you sure?”

 “Look around, this is exactly what the map described.”

 “It doesn’t look like much,” she says.

 He exhales deeply, allowing his cheeks to puff out. “It doesn’t look like much… yet.”

 “Yes,” she says. “Of course, ‘yet’. Which one is ours?”

 “Ours? Let me double check.” He rumbles through a stack of crumpled papers on the dashboard. “Here we go. Ours is number three.”

 “Number three,” she says, pressing her index finger against the windscreen. “One. Two. That’s it. That’s our spot.”

“Are you ready?” he says, taking her gently by the hand.

“I’m ready. If we pull this off, we’ll get A’s for sure.”

           

“Okay. You first.”

“Me,” she says, holding her hand to her chest. “Why don’t you go first?”

“You have to go first. HELLO! You’re the planetary expert. I can’t do my thing until you’ve done yours.”

“Oh yes, I suppose you’re right.” She takes a small laptop computer from her bag and begins to type. “I decided to take a little bit from all the models I’ve coded before and combine them into one brilliant supermodel.”

“Okay,” he says, peering over her shoulder.

“My inspiration was motion. Not only will our planet orbit its sun, it will also spin and sort-of bob on its own axis.”

“Nice.”

“I know! But that’s just the start. The landmasses and seas will move as well…”

“Tectonics?”

“Exactly, and it will also have an orbiting moon with its own gravitational pull, just to liven things up even more.”

“And weather?”

“The same idea, a bit of everything. There will be cold places, hot places, calm places, stormy places, all sorts of places. And the weather will change too. Different times of day, different weather; different times of the year, different weather.”

“That’s insane!”

“I know. But I think it’ll work.”

“Your turn,” she says, handing him the laptop.

“Me? Well, mine isn’t nearly as elegant a code as…”

“Quit stalling. I showed you mine.”

“Okay,” he says. “Okay. I decided to write a quite basic evolution programme…”

“Evolution! You must be kidding me.”

“What?”

“It’s a rip. Your evolution programme is just going to copy and paste the code from my model. Your lifeforming is going to rip-off my terraforming.”

“Hang on,” he says. “You didn’t let me finish. I started with an evolution programme, but I tweaked it.”

“Really.”

“Yes really, I changed a lot actually. This code will be 100 per cent original me. Totally in my image.”

“And how do you figure that?”

“Because of the controls.”

“The controls?”

“Ya, I coded in a load of controls to make sure that everything evolves in its own random way.”

“Oh ya, like what?”

“Well I engineered love.”

“Love! Great, that’s going to get us an A.”

“Not just love, I coded hate too; and jealousy, anger, lust, compassion, grief. I’ve coded all sorts – stuff that’s never been done before. Spirituality, religion.”

“But that’s mad. Anything could happen? The whole thing could crumble into chaos.”

“Don’t worry,” he says, as he taps his forehead softly. “I also wrote a code for the sun. So no matter what evolves – after about five billion year – it all goes kablammo!”

“Oh God,” she says, as the oceans begin to fill with water. “We should have left a note.”

The Condition

By Andy Hamilton

I place my head between his legs. It smells good here, warm and sticky. If I close my eyes and lay very still, maybe he won’t wake. Maybe I could just lie here forever and nothing bad would have to happen. I close my eyes.

I can’t sleep. He’s going to find out. Now, or later, or tomorrow if I’m lucky. He’ll see what I’ve done and then he’ll know that I haven’t changed - that I don’t want to change. Not yet. Then he’ll beat me.

He’s not a bad man. I’ve met plenty of bad men - men who don’t have a thing in their heart that isn’t angry. He’s not like that. Not always.

And I’ve loved him too, for my part. I’ve loved him the same way that I’ve loved everyone in my life. Unconditionally. The good times with the bad, the cuddles with the beatings.

He is waking.

I could jump all over him. Distract him, play with him, lick him from head to toe. I could remind him of all the fun we have together. Show him all the ways that I make him happy. Then. Maybe?

No. Sooner or later he’d see through me. Then he’d make me pay double for trying to fool him. He’s not a man who likes to be fooled. Besides, I’m not afraid of a beating. Not anymore.

It is time for me to be brave. This has happened because I want it to happen. I need it to happen. When he sees it, when he knows, maybe then I can start to change.

He is sitting up on the bed, rubbing his forehead and his wild brown hair. I can hardly breathe. I wait for the room to shatter, but nothing happens. I walk backwards to the corner. I wait.

He is putting on his trousers. The blue denim ones, the ones he always wears with the brown leather belt - with the heavy steal buckle. He looks at me.

“Hey,” he says absently. “Come ‘ere girl. What have you been up to?”

I stare at him from the corner. Through my eyes I try to communicate everything that I could never say. I try to make him understand what I did and why I did it. How I need him to love me in the same way that I love him. No matter what I do.

For a moment, nothing moves.

I see something. It’s in his eyes, somewhere behind the sleep and the hangover. I can see something small and new, something almost happy.

He understands. Finally, after all these years of loving him despite everything, he is ready to love me back. No matter what I do. I’m so happy. I could howl, but I don’t.

I step to one side and reveal the mess in the corner of the room.

Silence.

He takes a slow step forward.

 “Come ‘ere you piece of shit dog. I’ll teach you to shit on my floor.”

He grabs me by my collar and lifts me one handed. I run but it’s no use. My legs spin, searching for the ground, but there is nothing there. I can’t breathe. I can’t breathe. I can’t breathe.

“Now,” he says, as he opens the door to the garage.

“Now you’re gonna pay.”

Stories Coming Soon

Greetings, You may have noticed a lack of stories here in recent time. I have been sending my last few stories to different publications and competition - which require that submission have not been previously published. But, as these stories are accepted or rejected, I'll be able to update this blog at least once a month. So, you can expect a steady flow of stories again as soon as this clock strikes March. Cheers Andy

The Rosary

The Rosary
By Andrew Hamilton

Oliver is buried in the back garden.

Sharon walks to the sink, fills the electric kettle almost to overflowing and places it gently in its cradle. She peers through the window. The early September darkness has already infiltrated the garden, capturing shrub and flowers and half the wooden shed. She feels a chill down her spine as the first of the evening stars reveal themselves in the half-light. “Don’t worry,” she says, “they will be here soon.”

She plunges her hands into the warm, bubbly water and begins to slowly wash four China cups and four China saucers. The dishes, unused since last week’s rosary, are much too delicate for the dishwasher. They came from Lourdes, from the parish trip in ‘84, and now they spend all their waking days on the high shelf overlooking the sink – watching in displeasure as the kitchen, the hallway and the sitting room fall deeper into disrepute. Everything has changed since he left. Sharon’s washes and rewashes the cups.

… The glass of the windowpane is impregnable… The steam has made it so… The condensation… The power of hot and cold… The darkness can have the outside… The inside is mine… The whistle of the boiling kettle shakes Sharon from her thoughts - the cups, the tea, the kettle, the rosary. She empties the kettle into the still bubbly water, refills it from the cold tap and returns it to its cradle to boil again.

MaryAnn lingers at the open front door, shaking droplets of water from her half-folded umbrella. A rush of cold air enters the house and explores the hallway, before it makes its way up the leg of Sharon’s dress. She places her hand on her hip, a grimace of pain rolls over her face. “Come in,” she says to her sister, “where are the other two?”

“Hail Mary. Full of grace. The Lord is with thee…”

Sharon and MaryAnn kneel before the kitchen table. In the centre of the table stands a ceramic statuette of a woman dressed all in blue, perched on two small wooden block, each embossed with the words ‘Our Lady of Međugorje’.

“Holy Mary. Mother of God. Pray for us…”

Sharon looks to her sister – eyes closed and head bowed, ready to lead the next prayer. “She’s not so perfect,” Sharon tells herself. “A happy husband doesn’t make her better than me. It doesn’t make you holier.”

“Hail Mary. Full of grace. The Lord is with thee…”

MaryAnn leads the virgin’s prayer slowly, anointing every word. Nothing is rushed, no sentence is completed with any less relish than the one that went before.

“Why haven’t they come?” Sharon asks herself. “Where are Teresa and Martina? Why have they abandoned me?”

“Holy Mary. Mother of God. Pray for us…”

“She’s going to leave too,” she says to herself. “First him, then Teresa and Martina, and now her. I’ll be alone. I’ll be alone with his sin.”

“Sharon,” whispers MaryAnn, her eyes looking to her sister. “Sharon, I thought we might just finish early tonight. I though we might just say the Fatima Prayer, and leave it at that. Maybe have a cup of tea or something? What do you think?”

Sharon is silent. She looks at her sister – ready to cry or to scream – but instead she says nothing. Long, silent nothing.

“Sharon? Sharon, it’s okay. We’ll finish it, same as always. I just thought, you know, because it’s just you and me now, maybe we could do something differently. But it doesn’t matter. Lets start again.”

Sharon’s eyes leave her sister and turn to the sink and to the kitchen window. Through it she sees stars and shadows. She can even see a portion of the waning crescent moon.

“Hail Mary. Full of grace. The Lord…”

“Stop it! Stop it! Stop it MaryAnn, just stop it! I can’t anymore.”

Sharon begins to cry.

“I miss him. I miss him so much. Why did he go? Why did he leave me like this? Why Mary, why?”

MaryAnn stands and walks to her sister, arms outstretched. She helps Sharon to her feet.

“Don’t worry,” she says, “it’s all going to be fine now. Trust me.”

She walks to the sink, fills the kettle with water, and places it in on the cradle.

The kitchen window begins to cloud with steam.

The Front Hall Agreement

The Front Hall Agreement
By Andrew Hamilton

We decided to form the union right after Mom and Dad made us sign the Front Hall Agreement. It didn’t mean much at first, just an understanding really, but I figure with Christmas coming – why not give it a go. I mean, you remember how things get around here at Christmas.

It all started off well enough. Jim, as the oldest, wanted to be the head of the union and said just that loudly and with great authority, while beating Mike playfully with one of the good wooden spoons he had stolen from the kitchen. That seemed a fine idea and we all agreed that Jim would do just fine as a leader and would represent us with strength and considerable honour.

But then, when she thought about it for a little while longer, Mags remembered the Halloween incident. You know, the one with the car and the urine, the garden hoe and the new beige settee. Mags is always remembering things just lately, and lucky for us they usually turn out to be things worth remembering.

Anyway, after Mags reminded us about that incident, it was clear to everyone, and we agreed unanimously, that Jim possessed neither the moral fortitude nor the strength of character to be an effective leader. So we agreed that Mike – who Jim was just then using as a makeshift pillow – would make a fine leader too.

Mike, by everyone’s reckoning, was the stupidest and most ruthless of all the children, so we though it would be just fine to make him the leader of our new little union. But, just for some safekeeping, we also decided to appoint Jim his deputy, his second-in-command, just in case Mike needed help with any of the extra important decisions. So, like I was saying before, the union all started well enough and things proceed pretty much as they have always done.

But that all changed when little Jane decided to go out and get sick, real sick, with some sort of winter vomiting bug. Do you remember little Jane? She’s five years old now and looks every year of it. The little scamp.

Well, with little Jane sick with that vomiting bug and no longer able to perform her given duties at wash-up time, as set out clearly in the Front Hall Agreement, we really didn’t know what to do. It was quite a pickle, a real big problem.

But then, Mom and Dad sent out a circular to all children telling each of us to take it in turn - one night in every four - to dry the cutlery and put the dishes away correctly, just as Jane had always done. This seemed like a fine idea, and besides, we couldn’t refuse it under the terms set out in the Front Hall Agreement.

Jim didn’t like it one bit and he swore and he spat, and Mags just shook her head as she ran back and forth with fresh towels and basins of cold and hot water to poor sick little Jane.

Mike was angry too. We could all tell it but he didn’t let it show. Instead of shouting and swearing like the rest of us, he took off with Mom and Dad to the cinema – to discuss with them the growing discomfort that the Front Hall Agreement was imposing on the members of the union. You’d be proud of him - he really is becoming quite a fine leader.

So, as the second youngest child after poor, sick, lazy Jane, I took it upon myself to put away the knives and forks that night. That seemed like a fine idea and was working out well enough until Jim pointed out, while he wedgied me quite roughly in front of Mags and poor sick Jane, that I had, in fact, crossed a socially implied picket line and, as such, had basically destroyed the union and screwed us all forever.

After Jim explained the situation, and punched me once in each kidney, we all agreed that he was right and that I was, in fact, a complete fool who would eventually be the ruination of the entire union.

So, to set things back to right again, we all decided that I would use the coffee table, the one that Dad had received in a very favourable will from his Uncle Desmond, to smash the patio door and strike a blow for all the working children of this family, and indeed for the children of every family in this fair country. I know what you’re thinking, what a smart and brave thing for Jim to suggest, we are so luck to have him as second in command of the union. We voted on the whole idea and it seemed to be passed fairly unanimously, or as close as makes no difference anyway.

So, after throwing-up thoroughly and taking some time to stop the bleeding in my nose, I attempted to throw the coffee table through the patio door. But, alas and alas again, the attempt was destined to fail and with it all my dreams of redeeming myself and proving my worth to the union. The table came up against the ruthless stubbornness that is double-glazing – a capitalist product, of course, and a tool of the ruthless parent establishment. So there I was, one sheet of glass broken, the other completely intact, Mom, Dad and Mike expected home from the cinema any minute, Jim and Mags ready to kill me and little Jane crying and wailing from the bedroom. I don’t need to tell you, the whole situation was not what I had anticipated.

“Half a job is no job at all,” Jim said to me and he spat on a piece of broken glass and stormed out of the room. Mags was speechless, in shock maybe, she just stood there and smiled. No need to tell you, the situation as it stood just then was nothing short of obscene.

But just when it all looked hopeless, we struck upon a revolutionary new idea. I think it was Jim - or maybe it was Mags - who suggested it first, be we all quickly agreed that it would be a fine idea indeed. The plan was to use a shard of glass from the half broken patio door to cut poor, lazy, sick Jane – somewhere on her face.

It as a simple idea – a blood sacrifice – a statement that would show Mom and Dad just how serious we really are and also distract them form the failed political statement at the patio door.

We were all mostly in agreement and once little Jane was gagged and bound, she also seemed to adopt a calm attitude towards the whole thing and to realise that this was for the greater good of all the workers in this fine union that we are trying so hard to create.

Mags told Jim, who told me, to collect a medium sized piece of glass from the botched political statement and bring it to Jane’s sick bed. When I arrived back, Mags and Jim were both sat at the foot of the bed and Jane wasn’t even crying anymore – the little trooper. As I approached, she began turning her head from side to side suggesting, or so it seemed, that I should perhaps cut her somewhere on the neck or around the ears. But I couldn’t decide.

So I turned to Mags, who had just then – most bizarrely – taken Jim in a very rough looking headlock, and I begged her to give me some simple directions.

 “Just cut her you little shit,” she shouted, clearly annoyed and out of breath from her struggles with Jim. I’m so glad she was there – if she wasn’t, I’m not sure what I would have done.

So I made one medium sized cut in Jane, running from her left ear in an almost perfect diagonal along her neck. When I was finished, we laid her back in bed, removed her gag and bounds and retired to the sitting room to plan our next move.

As he sat on the couch, Jim, now much revived from his brief spell of incapacitation, made a joke of pretending to rest his feet on the coffee table that was no longer there. He wondered, out loud and in my direction, if we shouldn’t just temporarily retrieve the table from the botched political statement beside the patio door.

“We could put it back when we hear Mom, Dad and Mike coming to the front door,” he suggested. “They wouldn’t know any better, and besides, I’d have somewhere to rest my feet.”

Mags, who had positioned herself right in front of the TV, said that this was an awful and truly stupid idea, so we all agreed that to tamper with the botched political statement was an unethical and highly immoral thing to do.

So, instead of the coffee table, Jim decided to rest his feet on my back while we all waited for the others to return.

Andrew Hamilton